Thursday, January 22, 2009

4 comments:

  1. The entanglement of the letters here gives me the feeling of safe and sexy being one and the same. The white knock out text is a little difficult to read, maybe darkening the outlines would work or even using a solid color would give the logo more legibility.

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  3. This text is great, Sexy clearly "hangs" on to being Safe. The white , innocent safe is contrasted with the bold curvy sexy shows the difference between the meaning of the two words yet they both come together to make the simple statement. The simplicity here really works. the only thing I would change is the shade of grey used for SAFE .. Maybe try the next shade up from the one you have it might be a little too light.

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  4. I like how you got the word "sexy" wrapping around the word "safe". IT is very active to me.
    I would make the "s" of "sexy" more prominent though.

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